Three writing goals
My first writing goal is careful thinking and argumentation. I need to make sure my pargpahps all have a topic for each. Most of my papers I sometimes generalize things not bakce dup with evidence. In my In class essay I said “There is no way they're gonna change”. That was me generalizing instead of adding more information.
My next goal is sentence craft. I tend to have a lot of run on sentences in all writing. I don't know the correct time to put commas. In both my college essay and In class essay and pretty much in all writings to be aware of how my sentences sound.
My final goal is to work on evidence into my work. I need to learn the correct way to introduce my quotes. In my in class essay I Tend to introduce quotes the wrong way. When I was introducing one I said “One thing she said was”. Instead of Strauss writes. Which sounds a lot better. Aslo working on where to put the periods commas or parentheses when using quotes.
My next goal is sentence craft. I tend to have a lot of run on sentences in all writing. I don't know the correct time to put commas. In both my college essay and In class essay and pretty much in all writings to be aware of how my sentences sound.
My final goal is to work on evidence into my work. I need to learn the correct way to introduce my quotes. In my in class essay I Tend to introduce quotes the wrong way. When I was introducing one I said “One thing she said was”. Instead of Strauss writes. Which sounds a lot better. Aslo working on where to put the periods commas or parentheses when using quotes.